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Friday, May 14, 2010

GRAMMAR QUESTION, May 14th, 2010


Correct the errors in the following sentence:
Every one: women, elders, and children were cried when we had arrived with the survivors who had terrifyingly been injured and burned in a crushable plain.

3 comments:

Daniel.H said...

Every woman, elders and children had cried when we arrived with the survivors, who had been terrifyingly injured and burned in a crushed plain.

Devika said...

1 Every one including elders, women and children were crying when we arrived with the survivors who had been badly injured and burned in a plane crash.

2 All the elders, women and the children were crying when we arrived with the survivors who had been badly injured and burned in a plane crash.

Veronica Baig said...

DANIEL:You've made some good improvements here--your first clause is awkward, and think about verb tense and word confusion.
DEVIKA: Two nice solutions:-)