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Friday, May 28, 2010

GRAMMAR QUESTION, May 28th, 2010

Correct the errors in the following sentence:
For instant; the way in which the correspondents course differ then classrooms , is that the equipments' costs are very expensive  for  students are ought to have computer, internet, and another modern up to date things.


AMIN said...

For instance, the way in which the correspondents' course differs from the classrooms' is that the equipment costs are expensive because students need computers, internet, and other modern and up-to-date things.

Devika said...

A correspondent course differs from a classroom becouse of the equipment used are expensive for instant; studients should have internet to update things.

Veronica Baig said...

AMIN: You have made a number of good changes here; now think about word form and word usage;-)
DEVIKA: You have also made some good changes--think about word form/confusion, spelling, and punctuation. Also think about what exactly you are comparing;-)