Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The blue foreign unusual car has been driving erratic when it'd went off the road and the driver Jack Lemay is injured serious.
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The unusual blue foreign car had been driving erratically when it went off the road. The driver, Jack Lemay, was seriously unjured.
JOANNE: You've made some good corrections here, but now you need to think about who is doing the action in your first sentence--then you may want to rethink your second sentence. Along the way, also think about punctuation;-)
Let's try this again...
Jack Lemay had been driving his unusual blue foreign car erratically when it went off the road and he was seriously injured.
JOANNE: Better, but still missing some punctuation;-)
Devika Arnold
The unusual blue foreign car erratically driven by Jack Lemay went off the road injuring him seriously.
The unusual blue foreign car erratically driven by Jack Lemay went off the road injuring him seriously.
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