Correct the errors in the following sentence:
For instant; the way in which the correspondents course differ then classrooms , is that the equipments' costs are very expensive for students are ought to have computer, internet, and another modern up to date things.
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For instance, the way in which the correspondents' course differs from the classrooms' is that the equipment costs are expensive because students need computers, internet, and other modern and up-to-date things.
A correspondent course differs from a classroom becouse of the equipment used are expensive for instant; studients should have internet to update things.
AMIN: You have made a number of good changes here; now think about word form and word usage;-)
DEVIKA: You have also made some good changes--think about word form/confusion, spelling, and punctuation. Also think about what exactly you are comparing;-)
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