For entertaining Hai is liking to going too outdoors concerts in the Summer or during the Winter he is watching much reality television's shows.
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For entertainment Hai enjoys going to outdoors concerts in the summer. During the winter he watches alot of reality television shows.
For entertainment, Hai likes going to outdoor concerts during the summer and watching a lot of reality television shows during the winter.
DAVE: You've made a lot of good corrections, but note that "a lot" is 2 words, and you're missing commas in both sentences;-)
ANASTASIA: Nicely done:-)
For entertainment, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts in the Summer and watch reality television shows in the Winter.
For entertainment, Hai enjoys going to outdoors concerts in the summer. During the winter, he watches a lot of reality television shows.
JOANNE:Almost there--think about capitalization;-)
DAVE: Thank you!
Thanks Veronica, I wondered about that.
For entertainment, Hai likes to go to outdoor concerts in the summer and watch reality television shows in the winter.
JOANNE: Good!
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